P 16: “selected parents” for this proposed study. Not ethical for sampling. “Questionnaires” are mentioned a few times but no indication if student just means “demographic questionaire” which is perfectly acceptable but not for a qualitative design. By page 17 I am still not certain of the methodological design. P 20 Case study is mentioned but with a ‘phenomenological angle’ though phenomenology is only mentioned a handful of times in 177 pages and none of the relevant language to accompany the phenomenological angle (lived experiences, essence, heurmenuetic, etc. P 76. data kept in a locked file but for how long? How will the data be destroyed? Pp 120 and 165 Phenomenology mentioned but back to what was said in aforementioned comment (epoche/bracketing efforts?) What about triangulation? Methodology/design language needs to be consistent throughout the document. Chapter III Method – Sampling – Comments: technically yours is also a convienence sample. So you technically will be using a convenience criterion sampling technique. All Chapters – Writing/APA- Comments: when citing multiple sources, be sure to list the authors in alphabetical order. Please fix throughout the document before the next version.
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